From 4f7acf9ffbfcc555880b8650b01428cd0076135c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Fred Boniface <fred@fjla.uk>
Date: Fri, 2 May 2025 21:02:46 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Adjust policy and error message language to be more friendly.

---
 src/lib/stores/version.ts            |  2 +-
 src/routes/more/privacy/+page.svelte | 17 +++++++++++++----
 src/routes/more/reg/+page.svelte     |  6 +++---
 src/routes/pis/+page.svelte          |  6 +-----
 src/routes/train/+page.svelte        |  2 +-
 5 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/lib/stores/version.ts b/src/lib/stores/version.ts
index b0c06dc..6253bd6 100644
--- a/src/lib/stores/version.ts
+++ b/src/lib/stores/version.ts
@@ -1,2 +1,2 @@
-export const version: string = "2025.03.5";
+export const version: string = "2025.05.1";
 export const versionTag: string = "";
diff --git a/src/routes/more/privacy/+page.svelte b/src/routes/more/privacy/+page.svelte
index 6b3e485..f70cbbc 100644
--- a/src/routes/more/privacy/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/more/privacy/+page.svelte
@@ -17,6 +17,10 @@
             malicious activity.  See <a href="#datasharing">Data Sharing</a> for details on how
             we may share this data.
         </p>
+        <p>
+            With the exception of sending emails, all data is held - and always remains within -
+            the United Kingdom.
+        </p>
         <h3>Telemetry</h3>
         <p>
             If you opt-in to Telemetry, you will share your IP address and information about the
@@ -25,6 +29,9 @@
             your <a href="/more/settings">Settings</a>.  All of the anonymised data can be viewed
             at: <a target="_blank" href="https://liwan.fjla.uk">liwan.fjla.uk</a> at any time.
         </p>
+        <p>
+            All of the data that is stored is held within the United Kingdom.
+        </p>
         <p>
             Telemetry data is used to identify which areas of the webapp are used most frequently
             and where improvements need to be made.
@@ -36,6 +43,11 @@
             email will be sent before your email address is anonymised.  For example, if your
             email address is hello@owlboard.info, it will be anonymized to @owlboard.info.
         </p>
+        <p>
+            OwlBoard emails are sent using Proton Mail, a privacy-first email service based in
+            Switzerland.  To facilitate this, your email address will be securely sent to
+            Proton Mail securely.
+        </p>
         <p>
             You will be assigned a unique identifier which will be stored alongside your
             anonymised email address as well as in your browser.  This is how the service
@@ -56,10 +68,7 @@
         <p>
             CrowdSec anonymizes and processes data in accordance with its own privacy policy, which
             is available for review here.  We recommend reviewing their policy to understand how
-            they handle your data.
-        </p>
-        <p>
-
+            they handle any data collected.
         </p>
 </div>
 
diff --git a/src/routes/more/reg/+page.svelte b/src/routes/more/reg/+page.svelte
index 70b173a..b162b4e 100644
--- a/src/routes/more/reg/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/more/reg/+page.svelte
@@ -43,9 +43,9 @@
 
     function send() {
         toast.promise(request(), {
-            loading: "Contacting Server...",
-            success: "Request Answered.",
-            error: "Unable to contact server.",
+            loading: "Sending email...",
+            success: "Sent, check your inbox",
+            error: "Error sending email",
         });
     }
 
diff --git a/src/routes/pis/+page.svelte b/src/routes/pis/+page.svelte
index f21cea6..74b2202 100644
--- a/src/routes/pis/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/pis/+page.svelte
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 
     onMount(() => {
         if ($uuid == null || $uuid == "") {
-        toast("This feature will soon require registration.  Register in the menu.", {
+        toast("You must register to see results", {
             duration: 3000,
         });
         }
@@ -162,10 +162,6 @@
 <Nav />
 
 <style>
-    .important {
-        font-weight: 900;
-        color: whitesmoke;
-    }
     p {
         margin-left: 10px;
         margin-right: 10px;
diff --git a/src/routes/train/+page.svelte b/src/routes/train/+page.svelte
index 38e43b5..3a035b0 100644
--- a/src/routes/train/+page.svelte
+++ b/src/routes/train/+page.svelte
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
         load();
 
         if ($uuid == null || $uuid == "") {
-        toast("PIS Codes will soon be hidden for unregistered users.  Register in the menu.", {
+        toast("Register to see PIS codes", {
             duration: 3000,
         });
     }